"I would recommend taking your shoes and socks off before getting in the sand box, unless you want sand fill I your shoes, and socks" Ven advised.He looked back at Hiruko, "I guess the owner of the bucket and shovel won't mind if we borrow it, just don't break it"
{I got to go, be back later}
(Okay, oh, and I'm working on Venus's past if you want to read that..)
{Back!}
(Welcome back!)
Hiruko looked down at his boots, they were still a bit of a mess from yesterday.He sat down on the edge of the sand box to take off his boots and socks before stepping into the sandbox. The sand felt so weird to him, almost like water or some sort of silk.The young boy giggled as he walekd around a bit.
{Ahah, thanks}
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no problem. Oh, and I've almost finished Venus's past..will you read it ?)
Ven smiled watching Hiruko walk around in the sand, he acted like he had never been in a sand box before.Ven sat down and untied his shoes, he hadent quite learned how to tied them yet, but he could just tuck them into the shoe once he put the back on later.He took off his socks, and stuffed them inside his shoes, and stepped into the sandbox.
no problem. Oh, and I've almost finished Venus's past..will you read it ?)Ven smiled watching Hiruko walk around in the sand, he acted like he had never been in a sand box before.Ven sat down and untied his shoes, he hadent quite learned how to tied them yet, but he could just tuck them into the shoe once he put the back on later.He took off his socks, and stuffed them inside his shoes, and stepped into the sandbox.
{I was just reading it!}
Hiruko looked over Ven seeming slightly lost.He had never really built anything with sand or really knew what it was like until now.His mother and father were concerned about his health considering most of the time he didn't sleep and any time he eat something he would run off,clearly hiding something.They would often find him coughing, and not a small cough, a cough that would frighten any parent.Especially when they saw dark blood, so they kept him in site and inside.Safe, is what they called it.
Hiruko looked over Ven seeming slightly lost.He had never really built anything with sand or really knew what it was like until now.His mother and father were concerned about his health considering most of the time he didn't sleep and any time he eat something he would run off,clearly hiding something.They would often find him coughing, and not a small cough, a cough that would frighten any parent.Especially when they saw dark blood, so they kept him in site and inside.Safe, is what they called it.
{Ohh, baby Venus!T.T}
(How did I do, with an honest opinion?
And I had posted the picture beside it so you could see what Ven looked like as a 5yr old)
Atleast Hiruko had parents his all his life, Ven never knew his true parents.Ven didn't know if his parents were good, or bad.Wanted, or innocent.Social, or oucasted.He didn't even know their face.Their names..or even his real name.He named himself.Venus.Ven looked at Hiruko, "want to build a town out of sand?" Ven suggested.Maybe even make tiny people out of something they could find in the park, to use as the citizens.
And I had posted the picture beside it so you could see what Ven looked like as a 5yr old)
Atleast Hiruko had parents his all his life, Ven never knew his true parents.Ven didn't know if his parents were good, or bad.Wanted, or innocent.Social, or oucasted.He didn't even know their face.Their names..or even his real name.He named himself.Venus.Ven looked at Hiruko, "want to build a town out of sand?" Ven suggested.Maybe even make tiny people out of something they could find in the park, to use as the citizens.
{You are a very talented writer, I actual started to tear up, no joke. I seriously wanted to take little Venus in my arms and never let him go!
I saw hat, his so cute, and dare I say you inspired to write Hiruko's history a bit more different rather than it seeming so rushed.}
"A town?Like this one, ahah, sure why not!"Hiruko agreed with a small smile.Hiruko knelt down in the sand box, and picked the bucket.Once again he did seem a bit unsure of what to do but he was a smart kid and could figure things out on his own.
I saw hat, his so cute, and dare I say you inspired to write Hiruko's history a bit more different rather than it seeming so rushed.}
"A town?Like this one, ahah, sure why not!"Hiruko agreed with a small smile.Hiruko knelt down in the sand box, and picked the bucket.Once again he did seem a bit unsure of what to do but he was a smart kid and could figure things out on his own.
( thank you to the highest extent.
I tried to see things from his perspective, as I do with all my characters.I tried to imagine being in his position.His past is not complete yet, I still have so much more to write, but I'll do it later.)
Venus nodded at Hirukos question.Venus sat down on the dry sand and started making little rectangular like buildings, the best he could with his hands.Since Hiruko had the bucket."We can take turns with the bucket, okay?" Ven asked.
thank you to the highest extent.I tried to see things from his perspective, as I do with all my characters.I tried to imagine being in his position.His past is not complete yet, I still have so much more to write, but I'll do it later.)
Venus nodded at Hirukos question.Venus sat down on the dry sand and started making little rectangular like buildings, the best he could with his hands.Since Hiruko had the bucket."We can take turns with the bucket, okay?" Ven asked.
{your very welcome!
Really, I can't wait ti read more about him}
Hiruko holding the bucket in front of Ven,"Very well, then your turn is first. You seem to know what your doing."The boy told Ven.This would make it much easier for the both of them, considering Hiruko would have more of an idea of what to do instead of just guessing.
Really, I can't wait ti read more about him}Hiruko holding the bucket in front of Ven,"Very well, then your turn is first. You seem to know what your doing."The boy told Ven.This would make it much easier for the both of them, considering Hiruko would have more of an idea of what to do instead of just guessing.
( I can't wait to read more about Hiruko)
Ven looked at the blue, and purple bucket.He hesitantly excepted it and began to work.He used his hands over the shovel so he could put more sand in the bucket at a time.They could make any city.One existing, or one imaginary.Once Ven had filled the bucket.He stood up, and stepped out of the sand box, and walked over to a puddle, he crouched down, and cupped his hands getting some water, so the sand would stick together, and brought it to the sandbox, and poured the water from his hands into the bucket of sand.He gave it a second, then turned the bucket upside down, and waited a second, then slowly lifted the bucket.Revealing a piece of sand, that was the shape of the bucket.
I can't wait to read more about Hiruko)Ven looked at the blue, and purple bucket.He hesitantly excepted it and began to work.He used his hands over the shovel so he could put more sand in the bucket at a time.They could make any city.One existing, or one imaginary.Once Ven had filled the bucket.He stood up, and stepped out of the sand box, and walked over to a puddle, he crouched down, and cupped his hands getting some water, so the sand would stick together, and brought it to the sandbox, and poured the water from his hands into the bucket of sand.He gave it a second, then turned the bucket upside down, and waited a second, then slowly lifted the bucket.Revealing a piece of sand, that was the shape of the bucket.
{Ahah, really?}
Hiruko watched his with curious eyes, so that's how people did that.So simple, but he wondered if all that was really as easy as Ven made it seem.After all he had never really built anything with sand,"..seems so easy."Hiruko remarked,looking at the small tower of sand Ven had made.
Hiruko watched his with curious eyes, so that's how people did that.So simple, but he wondered if all that was really as easy as Ven made it seem.After all he had never really built anything with sand,"..seems so easy."Hiruko remarked,looking at the small tower of sand Ven had made.
(I loved reading it before..)
Ven held the empty bucket out to Hiruko."You try" he said.The only way Hiruko would find out if things were as they seemed, and if it was really that easy, was if he tried for himself, and found out on his own.Ven had confidence in him, he believed Hiruko could do it right.
Ven held the empty bucket out to Hiruko."You try" he said.The only way Hiruko would find out if things were as they seemed, and if it was really that easy, was if he tried for himself, and found out on his own.Ven had confidence in him, he believed Hiruko could do it right.
{Really,thank you}
Hiruko looked at the bucket, and then at Ven, he didn't seem so sure.Slowly his pale hand took a hold of the bucket, and he did what Ven had down before.He filled the bucket with sand, then stood up to go get some water from a near by puddle and poured it into the bucket.Hiruko glanced at Ven, wondering if he forgot anything, but nothing came to mind.So Hiruko flipped the bucket over, and when a second had passed he slowly brought the bucket up. It was a bit messy and loop sided, but for his first time it came out pretty well.
Hiruko looked at the bucket, and then at Ven, he didn't seem so sure.Slowly his pale hand took a hold of the bucket, and he did what Ven had down before.He filled the bucket with sand, then stood up to go get some water from a near by puddle and poured it into the bucket.Hiruko glanced at Ven, wondering if he forgot anything, but nothing came to mind.So Hiruko flipped the bucket over, and when a second had passed he slowly brought the bucket up. It was a bit messy and loop sided, but for his first time it came out pretty well.
(Your welcome)
Ven watched Hiruko do the first step of filling the bucket up with sand, until it was full.He watched him go and get the water, and pour it into the bucket.When Hiruko looked at him, as if to ask if he missed anything.Ven nodded an approval.He watched him flip the bucket upside down.Ven looked at the result.He clapped "it looks good." He said.
Ven watched Hiruko do the first step of filling the bucket up with sand, until it was full.He watched him go and get the water, and pour it into the bucket.When Hiruko looked at him, as if to ask if he missed anything.Ven nodded an approval.He watched him flip the bucket upside down.Ven looked at the result.He clapped "it looks good." He said.
Hiruko smiled at Ven's approval of his own little tower."That's a relief."The boy said, handing Ven the bucket yet again.He wondered if Ven got in trouble for yesterday too, would he get in trouble for today too?Hiruko certainly hopped not.
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