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Hello, I'm Ross, and I'm working on a crime/mystery story. I was wondering if anyone could give the Google doc linked below some feedback or comments! I want to get opinions before I actually start writing, so everyone is welcome to give my art and writing a look!

Spoilers are included!

Vir Lepus

Wow!! Ross I absolutely love your idea and I admire your ability to summarize it so well in the doc. Also your art style is so cool. 👌

Even knowing who the culprit is, I would still *love* to read this. Please write it!! 😄 I liked your currency system too. Simple but different.