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Ayeo. Recently finished up this guy, and I'd like your opinions and comments. I'd love any ideas that would make his profile more pleasant.
Thanks.
Warning: Wall o' text and swears inbound.

Centralising the front page of text might give it a better look

Bolding on the character specifics;
ie, Name goes here
also tends to make profiles more readable in my opinion.

I like the left-aligned front page, personally. Makes it easier for my eyes to follow and get to the next line!

I'd personally move the personal information page to the first page of the profile. It isn't particularly pleasing to be met with a wall of text, and people tend to want to see the specifics of your character first and foremost.