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( so I once had a star wars based rp awhile back but I feel it died too soon so I've decided to start up another one feel free to reply to this forum if you want to join)
On the planet of naboo lived a young woman...the one thing about this woman was that unlike most of the current queens hand maidens she instead wore a long red hood and underneath white linen like clothing. This woman was married to a man three years her junior...the sad part....she was only 13....you see despite what you might think marriage laws on the planet are very murky...meaning that their was no certain age that marriage was required...this provided an...interesting life for her.

But back to the story, Eleanor was a very sensitive girl in more ways then one. Despite being forced into marriage to one so young she quickly warmed up to the cuddly( and very Pervy ) boy and though they where married they only acted as if the best of friends.

Every day the young husband told her about his dreams of one day becoming a Jedi much like his uncle and they together would weave fantastical stories of what their adventures would be like together.

Those thoughts changed when one morning the two children played amongst the forest outside of the capital city.
The rain began to pour down on them as they ran through the forest giggling and dancing in the onslaught of rain, they quickly took cover beneath a large tree. They shivered and shook as they continued to laugh despite their cold soked personage...
This was until the younger of the two noticed a strange red light emanating from the tree which they had taken shelter under. Noticing this the girl and boy drew back in fear momentarily But as they did the glow soon became faint and comforting like the soft heartbeat in a mothers chest as she held her child close...and then...it spoke
" children I gladly lend you my branches and give you shelter...but tell me...from amongst the trees I've heard your stories do you truly wish to know more of the ways of the force?"
At this the two children nodded excitedly.
" then I shall teach you both...but sadly I can only teach you of the dark side"
At this the children became aprehensive with the boy asking
" but isn't the dark side for those who wish to harm and hurt others?"
The tree sighed at this
" in these recent centuries its message has become distorted and warped.. But today I stand before you tell you that once it was not so...let me tell you of a time when it was not so"
And so the children sat their below its branches as the tree told them a story of how one group of people tired of never being able to love...protect the ones they love or feel emotion separated themselves from the oppressive order which tried to controle them. By the end the young boy slept peacefully across the lap of his elder bride as she stroked her hands through his hair and slowly fell asleep against the trunk of the tree that they now found to be a second father to them they trusted it completely despite only knowing it for a day alone....in the morning when they awoke the tree was strangely gone and resting on the ground I front of them was a strange triangular red object ( a sith holocron ) attached to it was a small note that read " this is the first step"
And truly it was.


( I've changed a few rules in the STW universe so keep in mind this is an au...reply if your interested and if you want you can also suggest ways to better the story itself....thank you :). )

Details: Freeform, adjustable length posts, long-term RP partner preferred.

My curiosity has been piqued about your story idea and I may have a suggestion/idea that might further this story or maybe encourage more ideas or possibly a story?

Let's say in a distant past on a different messenger service, I once suggested the idea of Jedi Outlaws and Sith Rogues.

Those who were mastered their respective sides of The Force but felt that it was incomplete. That one side or the other wasn't truly powerful. They felt that they needed to become stronger by learning both sides but because of this, the Jedi Council banished such individuals but those individuals were called Jedi Outlaws, for living to their own view of honor codes but as for the Sith, they had to fight and escape to live a life of being hunted down by bounty hunters and other Sith members, thus being called Sith Rogues. Living in a world of hunt or be hunted but to never let their impulses bring total chaos. Even destruction can be controlled.

My idea is that your Sith Padawan learns the way of the Sith and Jedis from the most unusual source, those who learned of the Force but do not believe in the ways of their teachers but instead, to let The Force decide the fate of the Outlaws and Rogues who do no believe in balance but chance and fate.
Raider-jack29 Topic Starter

Interesting concept
Raider-jack29 Topic Starter

* bump
This sounds like it might be good. If it's still open I'd like to try this.
Raider-jack29 Topic Starter

It is
Sweet, I'll join then. Could you PM me anything else I should know?
Raider-jack29 Topic Starter

Nope
Alright then XD
Raider-jack29 Topic Starter

Still open
im always up for star wars RPs
Raider-jack29 Topic Starter

Yeah since some people kept posting unnecessary amounts of times on my last one I had to start a different one.
Sorry. I don't like not replying to posts i get back.. won't happen again
Raider-jack29 Topic Starter

It's fine

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