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(I am an amateur writer currently worker on a novel and have decided to start writing short stories and poems for the month of October. I just wanted a public opinion on my art and though I'm not very good at it I hope you won't judge too harshly...I thought this forum was only for artists because that's all I saw on this page...without further delay my first story/poem for the month of October.)


I once told him that love was blind so he gave me his eyes.

I once told him that my heart was his and he gave me his own.

I once was told that true lovers would die for each other and that's what he did.

I once told him that I'd die for him
And dead I am.

We where once told that love was eternal, never before had we found a statement so true.

I once heard a voice say that our love was true, they where right.

I once said that I loved him and he loved me...only now sitting upon our own graves do I know see...I once was loved...and now I am still .



(I hoped you like it)