Forums » Art & Creativity » (Temp. Closed) Looking for two alpha readers

EDIT: For now, I have enough readers! Thank you so much for your interest! If you really want it anyway, you can PM me and I'll see how far I am in making the changes that have already been suggested.

Pre-alpha, really.

Here's the deal. I'm writing a book. It's the first time I've attempted something like this and I'm almost a quarter of the way through. Generally, it's a bad idea to get people to start looking at stuff until you're done, but I have some pretty specific concerns that I want addressed before I get too much further.

What I don't need:

Editors. I will have that done professionally. The grammar will likely be somewhat messy, don't worry about it.

What I do need:

READERS. Ideally, I want one person who reads a LOT of fantasy and one person who only reads a little bit.
Discretion and secrecy. I likely won't make anyone sign an NDA, but that is the level of discretion I need.
A general sense of your impressions, emotions, thoughts, level of interest, and answers to certain specific questions.
Brutal honesty (I am specifically looking for people not in my circle of friends.)
EDIT: 18+ please!

Reply here or PM with interest. Please do not reply as an anonymous character. Please be aware that I'm asking for volunteers.

Thank you!

Yay! Prepare for a PM!

room for two! i have been is serious need of a good read and this seems right up my alley! i can guarantee all or you requests will be honored!

Thanks! I see you already PMed, will be in touch.

I am so interested! Let me know if you need any more volunteers.

Wooo! Thank you very much! Incoming PM!

I would love to read it

Thanks for the response! I really appreciate it, however I have temporarily closed the topic, as I've received enough feedback to create another draft. I may open it up again when that's done.