Okay, my profiles are all clusters of hugeness typed in crunchtime with limited availability. Navigating them on my phone is heck. However, I'll probably be returning in less than a month, with real access, and I'd kinda like a list of typos and oddities that detract from them. Does anyone feel like being a grammar/spelling nazi and scouring a few of my profiles? Also tell me if anything is worded in a confusing way, or if anything detracts from the flow of the profile. This way, when I come back I can get right to work and fix everything! Besides, sometimes your own mistakes get missed by your own eyes. I don't much care about "others" or "itachi" right now, but the others getting review would be mas appreciated. As the profiles are all small novels I understand if you don't want to read them all, just tell me the few you did, and what needs fixin'. Thanks! 
I'd offer, but I feel like I know them too well to find things that might be phrased oddly since I'd probably know what you meant. I can look for typos though if you want :p
yeah, loki. I'd say you could probably read Rudianos safely though, as you more fringe-encountered him and didn't have much direct exposure. But all in all, it may be better for someone who knows me less to do primary revisions then you can go back through if you wanna. Lol.
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