(there is never a period when someone is speaking. *"Hello," he said.* As opposed to *"Hello.", he said* which is incorrect)
"See you tomorrow at school," he replied.
"See you tomorrow at school," he replied.
(Sorry, I'll correct that.)
"Ok", she replied. She went in the bathroom and took a shower.
"Ok", she replied. She went in the bathroom and took a shower.
(the coma is before the quotation mark too)
Nomti did some homework he needed to do and started playing video games.
(Something tells me this would be a lot more fun if there were more than just us two in it )
Nomti did some homework he needed to do and started playing video games.
(Something tells me this would be a lot more fun if there were more than just us two in it )
(Oh my gosh. Sorry. And it might be more fun, but I am not sure.)
Nikita fell asleep early and the next morning, she came to school early.
Nikita fell asleep early and the next morning, she came to school early.
Nomti was already there when she arrived, sitting at a table in the cafeteria and reading a book.
She walked over to him and asked, "Morning. When did you get here?" She had realized he had been there when she got there and she had actually gotten to school early for once.
"I've been here about five minutes," he shrugged, "Good morning to you as well."
"Thanks.", she says, sitting beside him and pulling out her phone. "Four new texts?", she mumbles to herself. "Who in the world would be texting me this early?", she asks quietly, answering the texts.
(No comas after the quotations)
"Who was it?" he asked without looking up from his book.
"Who was it?" he asked without looking up from his book.
"No one" she says, dropping her phone into her bag and leaning back on the table. She put her backpack in the floor and grabbed her chapstick out of her bag.
"You're a bad liar," he chuckled and put his book away, "What's so important that tehy had to text you this early?"
"I have been told that.", she laughs. "It was my friend and if you must know, she thinks she's pregnant. I am going to see her after school. She didn't come today.", she says. She applied her chapstick and threw it back in her bag.
"What?!" he shook his head, "no offense, but people like that disgust me."
"None taken.", she said. A bell rang and she stood up, "See you after class?"
"You bet," he kissed her cheek, thinking about why a girl as young as them would risk having sex and getting pregnant. It disgusted and astonished him.
Nikita also was a little discusted but itwas her friend, and a frien's and friend, no matter what. She walked to her class and sat down in her desk, after putting her bag in her locker and grabbing her book.
The next time they would see each other was at lunch.
Nikita didn't eat today. She just sat down with her friends, and waited to see Nomti.
Nomti arrived with his tray of food and sat next to Nikita, "'Sup?"
"Nothing much.", she said. Her ears perked up at seeing him. A few of her friends were looking at Nomti. She still hadn't gotten the chance to tell them about Nomti and her except yesterday, which it was so loud out there, it would've been pretty hard.
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