HELLO THERE! I'm an aspiring writer, hoping to eventually be able to draw scenes and people. I was wondering if you could give me feedback on a few works I've done so far, they may or may not be tilted to the side (reason unknown) but I hope you can still give me feedback!
~Yours Truly,
SpectersBreath
(A.K.A. Silento-Kun)
(Piece one)
http://www.rprepository.com/images/gallery/gl-84395-1495831650.jpg
~Yours Truly,
SpectersBreath
(A.K.A. Silento-Kun)
(Piece one)
http://www.rprepository.com/images/gallery/gl-84395-1495831650.jpg
Holy Fruit basket That is some damn good art!!(Sowwy for cussing)
Well, it looks like in terms of basic anatomy of some parts of the body, you have a decent grasp of it, and with practice, you can definitely excel with it! (Honestly, you're better than me when I first started out as a beginner; my anatomy was horrible, but it's always a work in progress no matter what.)
However, one of the few big issues I have is that the uh... The head is too small in comparison to the rest of the body. It's probably best to make it larger so it looks a bit more proportional. In terms of minor issues, I would like to know if the straps around her body are bandages or belts. From the hint of blood on her arm, it looks like they're bandages, right?
Other than that, I'm glad to see you do so well on your first work that you've posted here, and I can't wait to see the finished work, if that's still a work in progress! And uh, if you didn't want critique, then I can just as easily edit the more critique-y parts out. Just let me know!
However, one of the few big issues I have is that the uh... The head is too small in comparison to the rest of the body. It's probably best to make it larger so it looks a bit more proportional. In terms of minor issues, I would like to know if the straps around her body are bandages or belts. From the hint of blood on her arm, it looks like they're bandages, right?
Other than that, I'm glad to see you do so well on your first work that you've posted here, and I can't wait to see the finished work, if that's still a work in progress! And uh, if you didn't want critique, then I can just as easily edit the more critique-y parts out. Just let me know!
This is a great work! I like how you tried a quite complicated pose.
Like Lucree said, the first thing that stuck out to me was the size of the head. As a general rule of thumb the shoulder is two head-lengths wide.
Also your lines are very scratchy. I know it's tempting to do, and it's a hard habit to break but you need to work towards deliberate, long strokes. Even when sketching your lines shouldn't be so feathery.
Like Lucree said, the first thing that stuck out to me was the size of the head. As a general rule of thumb the shoulder is two head-lengths wide.
Also your lines are very scratchy. I know it's tempting to do, and it's a hard habit to break but you need to work towards deliberate, long strokes. Even when sketching your lines shouldn't be so feathery.
I'd say it's alright. Heck, just being able to draw and make something look relatively humanoid is an achievement all on it's own.
Edit: Forget it
LightSide-Lucree wrote:
Well, it looks like in terms of basic anatomy of some parts of the body, you have a decent grasp of it, and with practice, you can definitely excel with it! (Honestly, you're better than me when I first started out as a beginner; my anatomy was horrible, but it's always a work in progress no matter what.)
However, one of the few big issues I have is that the uh... The head is too small in comparison to the rest of the body. It's probably best to make it larger so it looks a bit more proportional. In terms of minor issues, I would like to know if the straps around her body are bandages or belts. From the hint of blood on her arm, it looks like they're bandages, right?
Other than that, I'm glad to see you do so well on your first work that you've posted here, and I can't wait to see the finished work, if that's still a work in progress! And uh, if you didn't want critique, then I can just as easily edit the more critique-y parts out. Just let me know!
However, one of the few big issues I have is that the uh... The head is too small in comparison to the rest of the body. It's probably best to make it larger so it looks a bit more proportional. In terms of minor issues, I would like to know if the straps around her body are bandages or belts. From the hint of blood on her arm, it looks like they're bandages, right?
Other than that, I'm glad to see you do so well on your first work that you've posted here, and I can't wait to see the finished work, if that's still a work in progress! And uh, if you didn't want critique, then I can just as easily edit the more critique-y parts out. Just let me know!
Yes, they are bandages, she's an abused slave.
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