Forums » Looking for RP » Low fantasy high seas adventure rp (closed)

The world of Eros is a planet of seemingly never ending and vast oceans. On this planet are small islands that inhabit nations, or entire races yet to be discovered.
Here nations with vast navys, or pirates with hearty crews rule the oceans. Though in one large city sits the merry old ship known as the rosemary. Who's captain has died recently from a shot, as per his will. Command of the ship and its crew passes on to his dear niece Seline Masters,who is about to discover a whole new destiny for herself.

(This rp will be multi paragraph, and story heavy. I don't care if you have to describe the colors of a leaf. You'll make it work.)

Bump.

Hey there! It seems like your having trouble getting people to join, yeah? Let me help ya out a bit. The first problem I see, is that you've basically set up a story, but you have not actually given the players a reason to help out misses Seline over there. Further detail is much appreciated with such things, as well as it can benefit you as well. How about adding on that she is currently looking for crew members to join her? That would give players a reason to pursue the story, a rather basic one, but just because something's primitive doesn't mean it's worse or bad!

Another glaring itch with you post is this. "(This rp will be multi paragraph, and story heavy. I don't care if you have to describe the colors of a leaf. You'll make it work.)" I myself am not very good with multi-paragraph RPs, I know a lot of people on here aren't good with them either. That could potentially be scaring away all your interested players. It's important to be lenient, especially if you're going to post in the All Ages LFRP Forum.

Thank you, but I'm taking the advice of a good friend. I've been told that if I want to be a good role player, that I need to up my standards and keep to a nice base plot, while remaining vague at the same time.

Then again they are two years older than me.

Hey I have a pirate captain as one of my oc's. Would this be good?

Can you post multiple paragraphs?

Do you have an open post for this on fantasy IC?

I got a handful of ruffians ready to rumble

I've got a pm going for this.

Just about to make an
IC forum.

http://www.rprepository.com/community/forumthread.php?t=41573
Here's the forum.

Yeah I can. I had to before in other roleplays.

Also, good grammar is a must.

That too.

Then by all means

Well English is not my first language I try my best but sometimes isn't good enough
Let me know and I'll edit