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So me and a group of my fellow high-schoolers made a band, we call ourselves the Gods of Retribution. We've already made a few instrumentals, and decided to do a few covers. But when it comes to our owl lyrics, were a bit slow. Me and the other band member that are seniors have been the sole writers for the time, and we're running out of idea. I wanted to see what all y'all could come up with, and who knows, maybe it'll land in our first album, Leviathan.

Is a love song okay? I've got a song that I made and you can tweak it. I'd love to hear my ideas actually made. It's a slow song that describes feelings for someone. Here it is: It's called:

~What You Are To Me~

My love for you is stronger than steel
It'll last even longer than the stars
No one will ever know how I feel
And no one will know how I want to hold you in my arms

My love, my wonder, my everything
That's what you are to me
You are my Sunshine on a rainy day.
Yes, my dear, that's what you are to me

When I'm with you, I don't feel so bad
And when you're near,all I can do is smile
You keep me from feeling so sad
And to get to you I would run any number of miles...

My love, my wonder, my everything
That's what you are to me
You are my Sunshine on a rainy day
Yes, my dear,that's what you are to me...

My dear, you're all I think about
You're on my mind all of the time
I don't know what I would do if you kicked me out,
But to prevent it I would not commit any crime

My love, my wonder, my everything.
That's what you are to me
No one will ever know how I feel
But, my dear, that's what you are to me

And if we were to part, I would lose everything
Because, my dear, that's what you are to me

Yes, my dear, that's what you are...

To me...

-Shadow13