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Since I have had such a good experience with people being very friendly and supportive, but honest, and blunt, on here... I was wondering if I could get about three people to read the prologue, and first two chapters of my book I am working on the second draft for. I don't want any editing or beta reading of that sort. I just want three people to read and tell me what they thought as readers. Read the prologue, and two chapters as if it was just any book you got off a shelf.

I want to know how interesting it is, if it interested you at all, if it held your attention, if it excited you, etc.

So I need three people willing to read and tell me these things, but also who are:

Into the modern urban fantasy/supernatural genre. (vampires, demons, witches.)
Are comfortable with moderate to heavy swearing.
Are comfortable with mild to heavy action scenes.
Are comfortable with f/f relationships (the f/f relationship comes later in the book, but since that will eventually be part of the book and therefore people who are comfortable with it are my demographic, I need those people for this.)

If you're interested let me know huns, and I can email you the doc with the prologue and first two chapters.

*Slams down fists repeatedly*
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I totally get if you don't, but I am super interested if you're still looking

I can read! I am a good reader!

Sign me up man.