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Take a look here if you're curious.

I feel like my thoughts weren't coherent while writing the "About Tet" section.

Anything I can do to improve it?
ZeahRenee wrote:
Take a look here if you're curious.

I feel like my thoughts weren't coherent while writing the "About Tet" section.

Anything I can do to improve it?

I don't think you're rambling at all. Most of my character pages are even longer and trust me, it looks good, and I think everything comes off pretty clearly.
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damnationfromafar wrote:
ZeahRenee wrote:
Take a look here if you're curious.

I feel like my thoughts weren't coherent while writing the "About Tet" section.

Anything I can do to improve it?

I don't think you're rambling at all. Most of my character pages are even longer and trust me, it looks good, and I think everything comes off pretty clearly.
Alright, I just worried that things were scattered, not organized enough haha. Thanks a lot!

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