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I think this character is a little under developed and would like to have some ideas on to make her better.

They look pretty good to me, I think its more of how much info you are willing/wanting to put into the character's profile, I'm not sure if there is any other way or not (someone else on here probably has better insight) for example writing up a detailed backstory along with their personality as if something that's happened to them has had some effect on why they are the way they are, even if they have lost a limb, got a massive scar or even a special piece of clothing it might pay to explain how they got it and/or why (again though it depends on how much you want to reveal)

Other than that all I can really say is maybe you need to just jump into an rp with people and get a feel for the character you might even think of something else, in the mean time I'm sure someone else will pop up with better ideas