Forums » RP Discussion » Critique My Writing/ My Characters!

Heyo! Gab here! So, I was just curious about what other people think of my writing and my characters, so here I am! And here are a few questions that could get your mind going if you're unsure of how to critique me:

1. Have you rped with me? Are you currently rping with me? If so, what do you like about my writing style? What do you not like about it? What do you think I could do to possibly make any improvements on my writing?

2. Have you not (or are currently/ have previously) rped with me, but have taken a nice little gander at my character profiles? If so, what did you like about them? What did you not like about them? What do you think I could do to possibly improve their files? Keep in mind, quite a few of my character files are very old, so they may not be as great as my newer ones. I also have other characters posted here.

So, yeah, don't be afraid to say something! I just ask that you keep it constructive. I look forward to seeing what you guys say!

Hello, Gab! I have browsed through some of your OCs, and I think they are just as good as any other. The art style is a little odd, but that's just my preference, I can tell you worked hard on them. The descriptions of the characters are nice and thorough, easy on the eyes to read. Be sure to keep up the good work, Dear!