So, before I get started know that I ask you be 18 or older to read my newest character profile. That being said, I'm looking for critiques as well as thoughts on his current state of done-ness. I will take most critiques into consideration, and may do a few bigger changes, but if I'm being totes honest, I may only make small changes if I feel they fit the general idea for the character. Like, I'm prolly not totally going to revamp him, but I am looking to make him a tad more interesting. So, fire away.
EDIT his name is Axel Van Deriz, just by the way.
EDIT his name is Axel Van Deriz, just by the way.
Does he have a personality...?
Yes, I may have forgotten to add it in, though. I'll do that soonly.
EDIT: there, how is that?
EDIT: there, how is that?
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