Forums » RP Discussion » Spare some character critique?

Hey everyone. My Tharraleos has recently reached a finalization after many years of varying levels of tweaks. I find myself content with this iteration, and now the only question is how he's perceived from a perspective other than my own. That's what this thread is for and his bio can be found in my profile. Any and all comments/critiques are welcomed, but some constructiveness is preferred so I know how to progress with my character development. Thanks in advance for anyone's time!

The profile looks pretty well written to me and overall it's well organised. Nice, clear grammar is always a plus. Sometimes I wish more people wrote detailed discriptions like you did although I rarely do that myself, hah.