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Hello there, I am current working on my characters. Because I am no mothertoung I have some problems with the language. Nontheless I want to make them detailed and look even better than before. And that is why I need YOUR help!

I am searching for someone who has some spare time and would overreadmy characters-profiles, futhermore who would be willing to give me a feedback about style, language and general appeal!
It would mean quit a lot to me.

Here are my charcters, I will always update this request here to show you if they are ready to be checked or just need some extra information.







EDIT 08/05/2018: I finished writing them down, now I need someone who overreads them and wouldn't mind to give me a short feedback.

I thank you all for helping me, it means a ton to me! Thank all of you beautiful people!

Yo buddy! For Phoug, try adding some battle stats, or special abilities he has! Like, find a handful of attributes, and give him a score out of 20 of how good he is with it. For an example, check out Sin.

Wohooo! Amazing, you made a nice point! Thanks, I will include it Stay tuned my friend (^-^)/

So yeah, all of them are now finished, if you like to read or have some spare time, please check them out! It would mean much to me!