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I'm a sucker for a well written and well thought out backstory, so it doesn't surprise me to find myself doing my best to make the most wild characters somewhat believable.

Could someone look through this character's backstory and give me a critique? Thanks?

A note on the last bit of the story: At what time he emerges is not specified because I want to be able to roleplay him in all sorts of time periods while still keeping the 'man out of his time' trope

Pretty good all in all, an interesting character, if I can give any constructive criticism, it'd be to go over it once more for the sake of double-checking your grammar and spelling, as you made small mistakes here and there likely due to the bulk of the back story itself. It happens, don't worry, but I always find in role-playing that quantity, while well and good, doesn't trump quality.