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Abbigail, she's my new girl and I want people's opinions.
I've always wanted to have a witch/mage or something like that with dark powers!
I am up for all sorts of suggestions, esspecially from those people who are a bit more used with things that involve dark magic and everything that comes with it.

I really like what you've done with her tbh. I especially like that you have the basics and the extended stuff. It makes it really convenient if someone just wants the basics of your character. I love her backstory Btw. It's very interesting. Love that you used bolding to your advantage, it really made the dialogue stand out.

Now uh...heres the part where I give advice?Im no expert but I hope I can help at least a little? Im nervous if you cant tell.

1. I think you could go more in depth with her personality unless you want that to be discovered in the RP. It's nice to know OOC at least.

Heres a helpful article for you.

I did something like this for my character, Ira.

2. If you wanted, Id recommend using some coding and making your profiles really pop. Heres a great source of coding for you. Of course, this is all optional and not required in any way shape or form. Just might be nice.

Thank you!These advices sound so useful and constructive.The first link might not work, but I totally get what you mean, and I am really excited that you mentioned coding because I really like to code.Not speaking about how those templates look, they are super cool!