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Hey fellas, I've been slightly revising this characters profile to make it easier to read and navigate, while having all the information I want there. (Still working on the history page)

Would you mind checking it out and letting me know what you think about it? Things you like or dont like, things that need improving, etc. Helpful tips are always welcome!

Warning: Profile contains mature content

I appreciate your time and help!

I think more background on the BlackWell asylum would be a good feature! Also, if you are in need of some cleaning up, I'd recommend trying to familiarize yourself with BBCode! It really cleans up a profile, and can keep some bits tucked away. For example:
The collapse code:

Is a very useful tool for hiding tidbits of info and keeping it all in a nice little place.


This is a bunch of things on BBCode: https://www.rprepository.com/help/bbcode#75

I actually just learned about the collasping trick today, so I will be applying that to the profile for sure! What a neat little trick! I definitely need to learn more about the cool codes RPR has to offer.

As for BlackWell, what other kinds of information would you as a viewer like to see there? It was a RP group Rowen was involved in about two years ago, but it didn't last too long so I just included the most dramatic of the information, but I'd love to add more if people are actually interested in knowing more about her short stint there!

As someone who does barely more than boilerplate, I love your profile! Very well done!

Well, I suppose, you could probably do something about how she was treated their, just general stuff? And even if it wasn't in the RP, maybe add stuff in a direction that you would have expected it to take off in. Y'know? Maybe some other people she encountered? Because I feel like you could make that a large part of her history in general, even if the RP wasn't too long.

Btw, if you wanna, maybe we could RP out some scenarios for you to include? If you need ideas