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Hello everyone! I have created a website for amisa's story. I was hoping to get some feed back on it and to see if you guys would like me to make more.

https://codeprojects.org/-bSdZXeHG6DRdW9ZiYyyiYI8m5S_e-KJqqKYK_VARyE

It was an interesting story...but the short simple sentences throw me off a little...there's nothing wrong with the wording and grammer but I feel like it could be phrased better