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So I found an old backstory of mine that I wrote a couple of years ago that I thought would be perfect for my current character. The backstory is straightforward and the personality is fun to roleplay, but there is one tiny issue...boy was my grammar bad! (not like grammar today is any better) So would there by anyone out there who would like to be my one time editor out the goodness of their heart?

Here is the mess:
https://www.rprepository.com/site.php?char=1430407&page=333015