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Hello! My name is Ace and with the help of great Roleplayers such as Fallensiner and Music and hopefully many others in the future, a story has been made! In this forum I would like for everyone to talk about the story. Both the Roleplayers in the story or people who have read it. I would like feedback for the story and what everyone thinks of it. Just don't be too rude when you tell me how bad it is.

Howdy, now our first topic will be about what our current roleplayers think about the story so far (as of chaos over chronos bar 1) Some feedback would be nice about how the story has been going or if it even makes sense.

Additionally I would like to talk about what happens after this story, we have no idea if our characters will even survive this adventure or what will happen, but the story shall go on, with what I have no idea. But I do have story ideas! I will go over them and try not to give away spoilers, they may change or never get played and in what order they come in means a lot for character development so... these are just 'idears'

Well before Ace's appearance in the first story he was a pirate for some time. At some point in the story where everything calms down then Ace or another character might see a distress by the beach, either Ace or another known pirate. And by their great pirate honor among others from the pirates league must assist others if they can, and who knows what it will be like? Well there will be pirates and ship battles, pirate crews, captains and dangers from the depths! New characters that won't be forgotten and who may or may not stay with the group (They probably will not be joining if they die.)
Danger, adventure, fighting and a medium length storyline.

Another one is a story about dwarfs. families of dwarfs living in fear for destruction by a great monster. There will be dwarfs, mountains, elemental beings, dwarf parties and beer! some new characters and new culture, and some moral choices. Along the way the adventurers might visit some giant elven forests.

The other idea is The King Lipth send the team down south to the large gates separating Lurisca from the area down south to great barren plains where elfs and orcs fight and battle. Lipth would ask the team to go west to go to a roman themed land of humans. Colosseums, great shields and spears, chariots, culture. More than that there will be a great challenge for the team and an even better story, perhaps something even more, a twist, a substory and great chance for insane loot.

And if I am feeling very good then maybe the team could go southeast to the current home for Ace's and Lipth's race, Lupe's race and more story of Rea's race and where she is from. Epic backstory and where everyone stands currently, more story about Lipth,'The prince', Ace and the Arwick legacy.

So yeah! Tell me what you think. We still have to wrap up this story and there will be tons of surprises!

hmm sounds really good so far, maybe when I get the time and i finish up some of my homework, I can post Rea;s backstory.

Yeah, it all sounds good. But I do like that last one and getting to know more about your characters' story and race.
The "sending them south" would be cool too. Sounds exciting!
I would like to keep writing with my character and learn more about her, because for me, I learn about my characters the more I write about them.
Can't wait to write some more!

Yeah learning more about the purple, light and dark elfs will happen, for now though we have to get through this one and I would like a less epic storyline before we hop right into the good stuff again. I really like Ayline and the roleplaying style, reacting very well as I would imagine a person like herself to react but still not too predictable. We still don't know about her back story but she is from Chronos and most from Chronos were born here or came when the city was built and haven't been out since! And we still want to learn of her intentions with the adventurers.

I would like to know what everyone thinks about the current story! and Rea's backstory has to either be built around the world or the world has to be built around it. I've had some idea's about her people and where she is from based off of Fallensiner's written backstory. Still whatever changes I am thinking of posted here are mean't to be spoiler free for the most part. All I have really told are my opinions and none concrete idea's. I'm gonna try not to go on about anything about locations or backstories unheard of by anyone unless it is to the roleplayer themself to whom it concerns.

Also what does everyone think about think about things that have passed, like the adventured areas or trenzor and the desert and the crystal forest?

Rea a dark elf in her family she refused to conform to the female always abiding the laws of her race. Always with their own factions and their own class. She didn't want to find a husband and stay a home body. She set out on an adventure taking what she wanted when she wanted. She continued this style of theiving and seducing to get her needs. She is very garish and acts like a drunken dwarf when it comes to her actions. Unless she wants something or she chooses to. In her past she has been a lover of women and she will like guys on the ocassion. After leaving her dark elves cave home she came across a wood elf village, were she met her first love. She stayed with the village and defended it in the event when soilders came and raided the village. Since then she has had a large distrust in kings and soilders.

I have an idea for an entire story far apart from this story. This story takes place on another continent to the east around the mysterious and ever going south lands. The area is shrouded with nothing to go off of but it is ancient, dating back to the days of the great magus, groups of magicians that died out long ago as the culture of the world evolved to herald weapons like crossbows and siege weapons. Magic in the world has not stopped since the inventions of guns but the world has certainly changed and these lands are very scary to anyone that knows little of magic. Countless legends tell of travelers going out to explore these lands. People stay away from these lands because of the lack of legends of people returning and having a great time. Only the most skilled of mages have been known to travel through the lands and are very secretive. Some of these mages can be found in the trader's guild where all sorts of secretive people with the some of the best trades around. (The Traders guild may be renamed and is just good to note that it exists.) This secret and very magical land has not been a place for anyone but masters, but something happened. The mysterious fog and mist have lifted from the lands, fools now tread in and make it back to towns and cities to tell tales of what they have seen. Adventurers hear stories of magical lands and a challenge for any great mages to come and become the greatest mage among mortals and take control of The Tempest! The greatest magical temple ever known, abandoned for some time. Those offering control of the tempest say that the world has changed and it is time for the mages to rise again and they will have a challenge for any mages and rewards will be earned. So the idea for the topic is that groups may be formed at taverns or cities or adventurers may go it alone and meet around the general outskirts of the magical lands to venture in to be presented with their challenge. Along the way a lot of knowledge and information will be revealed about the world and magic. Any adventurer will do, warriors, rogues and paladins will work however the challenges will probably require magic knowledge or to find and persuade a mage to help them.

I think this is a nice challenge for overpowered mages and it is basically just a big bounty and the possibility to be a great hero, not for being in control of the tempest but to be the best mage in all the land and pretty much do what you like all around the lands. And I can introduce the civilizations around the area.

Sounds cool. Would be fun to write about mages and such, people who have more magic powers. The whole story and it's plot sounds too good. could it include different types of magic users like Shamans, witches, sorcerers, and the like?