Hello, I am new to writing and recently found the site Wattpad. I know that this is cringe worthy but I wanted to start somewhere to get feedback about what I could do better before I publish a full book and then no one likes it. I was hoping some people could read it and give me a few tips on what I could change to be a better writer.
Fnaf Oneshots
I hope you enjoy and please no hateful comments!
Fnaf Oneshots
I hope you enjoy and please no hateful comments!
I thought they were cute.
JetStorm wrote:
I thought they were cute.
PossitivelyNoOne wrote:
JetStorm wrote:
I thought they were cute.
I didn't think they were cringey. I enjoyed them
Great job, just read them! I can't wait to see more.
EvanlynDestiny wrote:
Great job, just read them! I can't wait to see more.
Love them!
Icysoul wrote:
Love them!
PossitivelyNoOne wrote:
Icysoul wrote:
Love them!
Your welcome
Very cool!! 
ChocolateIceCream wrote:
Very cool!!
Cool! Quite creative!
It isn't cringe-worthy at all! Maybe you could add some inter monologue. Although, I'm not sure if you could do that in 2nd person quite easily depending on how you write. But I said that so it doesn't feel all action and no feel. I'm not sure if this applies completely but there is a writing rule that says, Show, don't tell.
Not sure this was helpful at all but eh... lol
Not sure this was helpful at all but eh... lol
EchoSama wrote:
It isn't cringe-worthy at all! Maybe you could add some inter monologue. Although, I'm not sure if you could do that in 2nd person quite easily depending on how you write. But I said that so it doesn't feel all action and no feel. I'm not sure if this applies completely but there is a writing rule that says, Show, don't tell.
Not sure this was helpful at all but eh... lol
Not sure this was helpful at all but eh... lol
I will try being more Feel and less action, thanks for the tip.
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