I lives in a very large tree house I built with her father before the world went to hell. living off the fruit in the trees I try not to kill animals when she has to , other times I will risk going into a town to round up supplies but times are getting tougher and i live all alone.. s their anyone out their will to live with me. my tree house is very large , you will even get your own room if you want. who's in for the ride of your life
((looking for a guy to live with Rue , who will evetually get into an M-rated relationship with her))
((looking for a guy to live with Rue , who will evetually get into an M-rated relationship with her))
(Uh... Please try to type things properly... Look at your post. Does Amy of that look correct? ^^" Don't switch between first and third person . Only use "I" or only use "she" not both. Also, first word in a sentence is always capitalized. And pay attention to the tenses and relationship to subject. "I lives" is not right.)
Elemeno was sitting quietly in the middle of a ramshackle town full of vagrants and thieves and many other kinds of hooligans. The 18 year old was wearing faded jeans and a gray, long sleeved t-shirt. His jet black hair was combed back neatly and his face was had no definable expression except for possibly boredom.
"Why on earth did the apocolypse have to happen?" he grumbled as he looked around at the buildings, most of which were just stone and brick husks while others were sheets of plywood and metal stuck together. "I finally start looking for a girlfriend and the world ends... How helpful is that?"
Of course, the apocolypse was several years ago, but he still liked to complain about it, even though no one was actually listening, and he didn't care if anyone was. It was the only thing he ever really complained about, simply because his life at least seemed pretty decent and he was too laid back to actually fine anything else to complain about.
Elemeno was sitting quietly in the middle of a ramshackle town full of vagrants and thieves and many other kinds of hooligans. The 18 year old was wearing faded jeans and a gray, long sleeved t-shirt. His jet black hair was combed back neatly and his face was had no definable expression except for possibly boredom.
"Why on earth did the apocolypse have to happen?" he grumbled as he looked around at the buildings, most of which were just stone and brick husks while others were sheets of plywood and metal stuck together. "I finally start looking for a girlfriend and the world ends... How helpful is that?"
Of course, the apocolypse was several years ago, but he still liked to complain about it, even though no one was actually listening, and he didn't care if anyone was. It was the only thing he ever really complained about, simply because his life at least seemed pretty decent and he was too laid back to actually fine anything else to complain about.
i have many different characters)
((yea i know i started writing in third person before realising I wanted to do first person, so i tried to change it but must have missed a lot of spots... and sure foximama i don't mind))
(((i think i'll just go with third person now though))
As Elemeno complained about the world to himself and young girl walked past him . she had her hair short jet black hair with dark purple tips and bright violet matching eyes. she was positively gorgeous. Heads turned at the sight of her and the main question going through all the minds of the perverts left other than how the can get in her pants was , How in the world did a babe like her survive the apocalypse and still look that fine.
Rue Ignored all the stares of the men and continued on to one small road stall wear and older man sold supplies at high trade. Rue and the man held silent stares at each other before the man mad a small gesture with his hand this caused to rue pull out a bag of fresh fruits. . the older man smirked and grabbed a small black plastic bag. the two traded their bags Rue then nodded and started heading towards the forest.
(((i think i'll just go with third person now though))
As Elemeno complained about the world to himself and young girl walked past him . she had her hair short jet black hair with dark purple tips and bright violet matching eyes. she was positively gorgeous. Heads turned at the sight of her and the main question going through all the minds of the perverts left other than how the can get in her pants was , How in the world did a babe like her survive the apocalypse and still look that fine.
Rue Ignored all the stares of the men and continued on to one small road stall wear and older man sold supplies at high trade. Rue and the man held silent stares at each other before the man mad a small gesture with his hand this caused to rue pull out a bag of fresh fruits. . the older man smirked and grabbed a small black plastic bag. the two traded their bags Rue then nodded and started heading towards the forest.
( ok well i have an angle a neko/demon and a witch wich do you want? and do i just jump in?)
((how about a demon ... like the apocalypse was brought on by demons and you're one of the good ones... and yea just jump in))
((I hope I'm allowed!))
Lee stumbled out of the vast land of trees, his combat armor nearly orb to pieces. His chest oozed with a metallic red liquid, blood. He moaned and groaned as he fumbled through the foliage. He was a resident of the SS, Secret Society, and a soldier of the STCU or Specially Trained Combat Unit. Both acronyms were printed on the breast of his armor, that had been brutally slashed through. He was fresh out of the academy when he was called to duty. His mission was for he and his unit to launch an attack on Daemon territory, they utterly failed. They were ambushed by a Daemon patrol unit, with the Daemon's brutal strength and extreme dexterity, even with the STCU's expertise in combat, they lost. Only three men were alive out of the battle, barely able to escape. The three soldiers were Talon, Ray, and Lee, they were all new recruits coming from the academy. Talon bled to death, and Ray wandered off and was killed by a band of Half-Breeds. A vicious cross between Daemon and human, absolute brutality is all they have to offer.
That brings us to the SS, or Secret Society. The SS is a Government facility deep underground which no one knows the location of. Lee was equipped with his dark grey battle armor and his dark grey helmet with a violet tinted visor, which was mostly cracked and shattered. With straining arms he tore his helmet from his head and threw it aside. He had lustrous hazel eyes and lush brown hair, oh so gingerly put up in the front. He had two pistols strapped to his thighs and a drained power sword on his back. He noticed the woman walking toward the forest, his eyes lightened as he realized he had reached some form of civilization. "Please miss!" He pleaded at her as she strolled her way toward the dense forest. "Can you please help me?" He dropped to his knees in exhaustion. "All I am in need of is food, drink, and some sort of medical attention." He groaned and he grazed his wounds with his fingers.
((I figured I would help with the storyline a bit.))
Lee stumbled out of the vast land of trees, his combat armor nearly orb to pieces. His chest oozed with a metallic red liquid, blood. He moaned and groaned as he fumbled through the foliage. He was a resident of the SS, Secret Society, and a soldier of the STCU or Specially Trained Combat Unit. Both acronyms were printed on the breast of his armor, that had been brutally slashed through. He was fresh out of the academy when he was called to duty. His mission was for he and his unit to launch an attack on Daemon territory, they utterly failed. They were ambushed by a Daemon patrol unit, with the Daemon's brutal strength and extreme dexterity, even with the STCU's expertise in combat, they lost. Only three men were alive out of the battle, barely able to escape. The three soldiers were Talon, Ray, and Lee, they were all new recruits coming from the academy. Talon bled to death, and Ray wandered off and was killed by a band of Half-Breeds. A vicious cross between Daemon and human, absolute brutality is all they have to offer.
That brings us to the SS, or Secret Society. The SS is a Government facility deep underground which no one knows the location of. Lee was equipped with his dark grey battle armor and his dark grey helmet with a violet tinted visor, which was mostly cracked and shattered. With straining arms he tore his helmet from his head and threw it aside. He had lustrous hazel eyes and lush brown hair, oh so gingerly put up in the front. He had two pistols strapped to his thighs and a drained power sword on his back. He noticed the woman walking toward the forest, his eyes lightened as he realized he had reached some form of civilization. "Please miss!" He pleaded at her as she strolled her way toward the dense forest. "Can you please help me?" He dropped to his knees in exhaustion. "All I am in need of is food, drink, and some sort of medical attention." He groaned and he grazed his wounds with his fingers.
((I figured I would help with the storyline a bit.))
crashing down on a man of armor her wings were new and she had no clue how to use the dang things standing up she felt bad "oh dear im soo sorry *hiding behind her bangs* are are you ok??" being the only daughter of discored fresh out of the nest wasnt easy neither was being an entire dimension away then she noticed the..... the oh whats it called "BLOOD!....." "d-did i do that??" she asked quitly as the flowers under her floated up singing Santa baby
Just as Lee was regaining his balance his head was smashed into the ground by the creatures he had just lost his men to. Lee flipped upward using every ounce of his strength then I strapping one of just pistol from his thighs. He cocked the pistols and aimed at the fiends head. He mumbled some hateful things at the beast. He answered her question. "Possib-" before he finished he collapsed on te ground in excruciating pain, he had his chest attempting to prevent it from bleeding. "You blood curdling monsters!" He still held his pistol toward her, his index finger hovering over the trigger. "You deserve to die in the most inexplicable way!" With wobbly legs he stood. "Why invade the world, eh?" He laughe out of hysteria. "Because you bafoons feel the need to rule everything!" He straightened his back and regained his strength. He furrowed his brow. "Give me one good reason I shouldn't blow your horned head clean off of your body right now." He said in a low intimidating growl.
invade?? what is he talking about "eep! *she screamed seeing the pistol* invade oh no if i was invading my dad would be waayyyy happier" thinking of why she was here in the first place father did want me to make a name for myself but not in that way shaking, her anxiety kicking in. she covered her face with her wings "no! please i-i'm not invading its just me" then she heard was the splatter of rain yet it tasted like chocolate milk "heh....*laughing faintly* chocolate rain........." then she looked at the gun "are you going to shoot me??" she whimpered (ps guys sorry well meet up soon lol i was helping me and the new guy actually get in hope you arnt mad 
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((Ivy I suggest you look over your posts. Most of it makes no sense and I don't know how to respond half of the time, please look over it and attempt at trying to structure it a bit better. Sorry! I think I speak for everyone! 
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(im sorry i fixed it i was trying to get us all to be friends so i had her faint sorry ps she's daughter of discored so thing get very weird when im around)
(( let me get this straight. She is a Daemon that has turned good, and she is the Daughter of Discord?))
(yeah they wanted her to be good and daughter of discored is all i had haha sorry ps discored isnt bad he just likes discored and caos well thats how i see it)
((Hey, in another RP I know I criticized the way you structured your posts, grammar and spelling wise, the offer is still open for you to PM and I could help you, or possibly start a PM RP?))
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