(Well, you've got this ancient faceless thing literally everywhere around him and he doesn't like...freak out. At all.)
(PTSD's one hell of a disorder.)
(PTSD's one hell of a disorder.)
(Post Traumatic Stress Disorder, and I think your character has it. With that being said, I honestly don't think your character can handle being put onto the field with his temperance (and also I really don't want to keep this initiation going longer than it should. This one is the longest initiation to date.). I'm willing to help you fix his flaws if you wish. And also, having or feeling no emotions is obviously false. The guy feels anger and pain, so there's two emotions already. Aside from that, I see where you want to go with this character, but I'm...not seeing good things come out of it in the future. I'm particularly known for putting people in hostile situations with the heroes as their starting point, and I don't need any more dead heroes when they shouldn't be. Point is, revise your character and imbue him with the gift of a conscience. If you need help on doing such, feel free to ask.)
Alrighty! Good! Progress!
Well, get back to me when you can. I'm patient.
Well, get back to me when you can. I'm patient.