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A bronze cyborg with a bow and quiver of arrows on his back lands from the overhead rooftop to the ground below."Why am I here?"he says

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An old man sits on the bench reading the newspaper, replying to the cyborg without any signs of movement.

"What do you think you're here for?" The old man asks.
"To get a bounty. I'm not sure why else you would have called me here in the first place." He said, unsure about what the old man meant by the question.
"A...bounty? Hmm...then I think I have quite the job for the likes of that. Well, to be more clearer, I don't have a job for you. They do. The hunters." The man flipped a page of his newspaper and cleared his throat. "You see that glowing device over there? That's a space-time distortion plate. A teleporting, if you will. Use it, and you will arrive at a place called the Tangent Hunter HQ. Ask for the leader of Hunter Special Ops Group Nine. It is then that your quest will truly begin."
"OK I'm in" he said
"Please, if you can step on the plate...that would be nice." The old man said, suddenly putting down his paper.
"ok, sorry, getting to that now," he said as he was stepping on the plate
Before the cyborg could step onto the plate, it violently exploded with enough force to knock him down.

From behind him, the old man chuckled.

"Heh. Fool. Don't you know how to survey your surroundings?" His voice became increasingly metallic and robotic as his skin turned into a dark bronze color. He jumped into the air and landed, with his arm cannons ready to fire.
As the old man was changing, decard was preparing to shoot him with the bow and an arrow. "Who are you?" he said, prepared to fight.
"My name is, you don't need to remember, Mr. Smith. I've been infused with nano machines that can reassemble any part of my body into a killing machine!!" He says, blasting away with his guns.
(you should recheck my character. i made some improvements)
He gets out a razor sharp arrow and shoots it at the old man."why did you call me here, really?"he said, brooding.
"I didn't call you here. The grand deity makes all decisions. I'm just here to cause trouble for those hunters-AUGH!" Mr. Smith's nanomachines reassembled and promptly healed the damage taken from the arrow. "Already, I've made a beacon so that it would attract rogue tangents from across the city! This place is going to be wiped off the map very soon if they don't get here!"
He uses a Greek fire arrow to shoot."that's a Greek fire arrow as soon as it entered your body a very flammable liquid shoots into your body and then a spark will come from it and slowly burn your body from the inside out." he said ,confidant.
"No! Impossible! Nanomachines, assemble! Assemble! Assemble!!" Smith exclaims as he melts into a pool of metallic oil and dissolves.
"Well, now what should I do"he said.
Wait til I post a new topic in 005 - Us Versus the World.
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