No worries at all, I am the same way with my posts and thinking of better ways I could have said it or more I could have added. The only reason I asked is I thought perhaps she would have had trouble rowing to shore in a small boat with such a storm roaring. But, it seems she managed and that's awesome.
Likewise I'm always looking to better my writing style and descriptive ability, so feel free to share if you have tips or questions
Get well soon! *wards off the waves of sickness from Freyera and Iltheyn*
Likewise I'm always looking to better my writing style and descriptive ability, so feel free to share if you have tips or questions
Get well soon! *wards off the waves of sickness from Freyera and Iltheyn*
Uh oh! I might be in error already. In my mind, the storm was only just beginning. So while it would have certainly been challenging in a little rowboat, so long as she got into the shallower waters closer to the shore, it would still be feasible to make it. Even in choppy waters, the wind and waves should be with her that close to land as the storm blows in, rather than blowing out.
At least, that's how I was seeing it. I hope I'm not completely off my rocker and I do apologize if I am.
And thanks! Hopefully I can keep this sickness over here and not spread it around.
At least, that's how I was seeing it. I hope I'm not completely off my rocker and I do apologize if I am.
And thanks! Hopefully I can keep this sickness over here and not spread it around.
Freyera wrote:
Uh oh! I might be in error already. In my mind, the storm was only just beginning. So while it would have certainly been challenging in a little rowboat, so long as she got into the shallower waters closer to the shore, it would still be feasible to make it. Even in choppy waters, the wind and waves should be with her that close to land as the storm blows in, rather than blowing out.
At least, that's how I was seeing it. I hope I'm not completely off my rocker and I do apologize if I am.
And thanks! Hopefully I can keep this sickness over here and not spread it around.
At least, that's how I was seeing it. I hope I'm not completely off my rocker and I do apologize if I am.
And thanks! Hopefully I can keep this sickness over here and not spread it around.
You've probably got the right of it, I wasn't sure how progressed the storm was. So we'll go with that xD
BreezyDawn wrote:
You've probably got the right of it, I wasn't sure how progressed the storm was. So we'll go with that xD
Whew! Okay! Sounds good! Sorry for the confusion and I'll be sure to add more clarity and/or ask more questions as we move forward.
Beetlebelle wrote:
Welcome to the RP Freyera! 
I hope you get well soon.
I hope you get well soon.And may I say that your artwork is beautiful! I especially like the bouncing kitty, though I got quite a giggle off of your clam beast. xD
Finished my post on RoA. Gonna see if I can muscle through this cold for my post on this one tonight.
Freyera wrote:
Beetlebelle wrote:
Welcome to the RP Freyera! I hope you get well soon.
I hope you get well soon.And may I say that your artwork is beautiful! I especially like the bouncing kitty, though I got quite a giggle off of your clam beast. xD
Oh, Thank you very much!
Thats always great to hear ^v^
iltheyn wrote:
Finished my post on RoA. Gonna see if I can muscle through this cold for my post on this one tonight.
Beetlebelle wrote:
Oh, Thank you very much! Thats always great to hear ^v^
Thats always great to hear ^v^
I did it anyway xP
Fell asleep mid afternoon yesterday so I'm uncomfortably awake in the dead of night. Happens when I get sick lately, not sure why.
Fell asleep mid afternoon yesterday so I'm uncomfortably awake in the dead of night. Happens when I get sick lately, not sure why.
Im sad for you, truly. But kinda happy for us. We get more fun story out of it. I really like chowder xD fun fun.
I took some liberties with Goff's part, if you want me to rewrite him somewhere else Freyera you can, I don't want to get in the way if you had a different idea of who'd be there. I just figured since someone was approaching anyway...?
Tusitala2017 wrote:
Hope you guys get better soon and welcome Freyera.
iltheyn wrote:
I took some liberties with Goff's part, if you want me to rewrite him somewhere else Freyera you can, I don't want to get in the way if you had a different idea of who'd be there. I just figured since someone was approaching anyway...?
Just gotta say I'm glad this rp is still pressing on. I began three rp's recently and all petered out already but for this one. It is my only writing outlet for now! Rp prompts don't usually catch my fancy very easily.
BreezyDawn wrote:
Just gotta say I'm glad this rp is still pressing on. I began three rp's recently and all petered out already but for this one. It is my only writing outlet for now! Rp prompts don't usually catch my fancy very easily.
That is, of course, the royal 'We', but I'm sure everyone else would agree with me!
Except for that shifty iltheyn fellow. Gotta keep a close eye on him...
