Haha! Having believable npcs is a sign that you're a good writer I think.
And I bet Atoli would love to have you as a guard! xD
And I bet Atoli would love to have you as a guard! xD
Thanks! I am very good at making things up on the fly. Most of the time.
Also Tusitala, if it were anyone but Grum I might have some issue with this, but there's nothing stopping Taff from doing so and I also find the prospect of Grum waking up as Taff to be too funny not to commit to. So you're good. Yeeee
Also Tusitala, if it were anyone but Grum I might have some issue with this, but there's nothing stopping Taff from doing so and I also find the prospect of Grum waking up as Taff to be too funny not to commit to. So you're good. Yeeee
Ok
I found the idea of the burly cowardly one vs scrawny one with too much bravado too amusing to give it a miss
I found the idea of the burly cowardly one vs scrawny one with too much bravado too amusing to give it a miss
How do you think Tara would react to Atoli? I wanted them to interact a little.. ;v; And I wonder what she would think if she knew Merthyr was letting out a prime subject to interrogate.
Tara would mostly be wondering why Atoli in particular felt loyalty towards the bandits in the first place. She's only been acquainted with the worst Grum can be, whereas he and Atoli were probably bonding pretty well before his show of complete disregard for those around him.
She's not quick to judge unless a life is on the line. She would prefer to be there to preside over the interrogation in case Atoli tried to pull a fast one though. Tara's no stranger to different cultural groups in conflict; this case being humans vs. mythical races. And if Atoli stuck around they could even become friends, though ofc if a moral decision had to be made on something I'm sure they'd bicker.
There's still time. If Merthyr and Atoli hit it off well enough the two may yet meet.
Also I'ma make Grum's post soon.
She's not quick to judge unless a life is on the line. She would prefer to be there to preside over the interrogation in case Atoli tried to pull a fast one though. Tara's no stranger to different cultural groups in conflict; this case being humans vs. mythical races. And if Atoli stuck around they could even become friends, though ofc if a moral decision had to be made on something I'm sure they'd bicker.
There's still time. If Merthyr and Atoli hit it off well enough the two may yet meet.
Also I'ma make Grum's post soon.
Atoli isn't loyal at all to Grum and his group(he took her food! ), if she got the chance to get out by ratting on them she would do it in a heart beat. xD
Merthyr is being pretty nice to her though, so she might stick around to repay the favor. :>
Merthyr is being pretty nice to her though, so she might stick around to repay the favor. :>
Tara would be pretty glad to hear that.
Bouncing between different threads for story building.
Bouncing between different threads for story building.
Just read your post, @Tusitala2017. I think you should edit it a bit so it gives more wiggle room for the other characters to have time react.
I'm okay with Atoli being re-shackled and led around for the moment since she willingly wanted to leave the barracks. Maybe you should alter the post with us just entering the tavern though and introducing her to Tara before you go shackling them to each other first.
I'm okay with Atoli being re-shackled and led around for the moment since she willingly wanted to leave the barracks. Maybe you should alter the post with us just entering the tavern though and introducing her to Tara before you go shackling them to each other first.
I'm having a hard time working out where I should bring my character in currently, any ideas?
Thekaleidoscope wrote:
I'm having a hard time working out where I should bring my character in currently, any ideas?
Try and think of where your character was last in the story, and where they might be after the synopsis that iltheyn wrote. Thats what I did for Atoli. :>
Waiting on other people to post. Let me know if I should change anything. :>
Sorry for suddenly hopping in haha, hopefully I got most of the details right. I did my best to read through all of the responses and not skip anything. I’m quite happy to see this being revived, y’all have no idea how happy I am to be back to this.
Marcello might return soon, I don’t want to start without his bio and art up but I had to lend my laptop to my friend and I won’t be getting it back until 5 PM or so >~<
Marcello might return soon, I don’t want to start without his bio and art up but I had to lend my laptop to my friend and I won’t be getting it back until 5 PM or so >~<
strawberry_champion wrote:
Sorry for suddenly hopping in haha, hopefully I got most of the details right. I did my best to read through all of the responses and not skip anything. I’m quite happy to see this being revived, y’all have no idea how happy I am to be back to this.
Marcello might return soon, I don’t want to start without his bio and art up but I had to lend my laptop to my friend and I won’t be getting it back until 5 PM or so >~<
Marcello might return soon, I don’t want to start without his bio and art up but I had to lend my laptop to my friend and I won’t be getting it back until 5 PM or so >~<
Welcome back!
Take your time. I still need to wait on Tusitala before I post next. And I probs will be including Kerik, just because... well, something that wasn't supposed to go anywhere in the last story with him went somewhere.
GUESS WHO'S BACK
BACK AGAIN
KERIK'S BACK
TELL A FRIEND (don't)
I tried to make sure I didn't forget anything in that post but I might have still. Also we've got another potential addition likely prospecting for a post right now. I don't actually know if they are, but I hope.
BACK AGAIN
KERIK'S BACK
TELL A FRIEND (don't)
I tried to make sure I didn't forget anything in that post but I might have still. Also we've got another potential addition likely prospecting for a post right now. I don't actually know if they are, but I hope.