can you be leave my fingers already healed from where I burned it
nothing, just that and pulling the dead skin off the next day, it was a little raw yesterday but almost completely healed today, the top layer of my skin isent fully healed yet but I can type again
Also, would you be willing to help me go over my new story I just finished? Its kind of long but I want someone I trust to help me, because tell have the ability to delete and fix stuff... I don't ant to trust the wrong person and lose everything.
Also, would you be willing to help me go over my new story I just finished? Its kind of long but I want someone I trust to help me, because tell have the ability to delete and fix stuff... I don't ant to trust the wrong person and lose everything.
Sure I'll take a look at it. Tus would be another person I would trust if she is not too busy. That will give you two perspectives.
Ok ill link you in the morning
Also note i do reference events from our rps with Tus but it has nothing to do with them, It's more of an Alternate universe
Also note i do reference events from our rps with Tus but it has nothing to do with them, It's more of an Alternate universe
I am not sure what you mean about reference events from our rps. Please explain.
Pretty much I have an alternate universe very of Alekus so I pulled some of our story into his background. It's just filler for this story as i needed to shed light on the companion of Kie the main character
“ Ugh! I hate sand!!” Alekus complain as he and Kie walked.
“ I do to but im not yelling about it” Kie said
“Sorry, my friends had been kept hostage in a desert, I hate being away from nature, and being here just reminds me of a very rough time in my life”Alekus said sighing.
“Do you want to talk about it? You don't have to but it seems to be bothering you” Kie said.
Alekus sighed softly and nodded. “Then let me start from the beginning”
“ I was born into a Noble family, My father was a head knight, my mother was a Princess. While my mother died when i was very young. One of my uncles was the Sulton, eh another name for King in that area. Since he had no male heir, being his nephew i was in line for the throne. But I didn't want to stay in this kingdom, they were cruel and vile. Even my father was a horrible Viscet. I ran away, I ran as far away as I could. I found my far to Camelot, the rival kingdom from where i came from. Anyway, I hide who i was and I made some close friends” Alek Said as he walked. “ Years down the line my father found me, and he tried to take me back, but the King of Camelot at the time, protected me as i was a loyal Citizen of his kingdom, as well as the Prince’s best friend” A soft smile come on Alek’s face
“ Anyway. After he left me and Prince Mert decided to go hunting, but he made a decision to bring along his fiance and her handmade. About half way into out trip my father and an army of bandits jumped us and captured us, He hoped that by holding my friends hostage he could turn me back to his side, He even tried to marry me off to the same Female that my friend was going to marry. But in the end we all escaped… few of us parted ways but the rest we return to Camelot.. Mert was crowned king after his father died..” Alek sighed and shook his head.
“ You don't have to continue if you don't want to” Kie said
“Thanks Kie” Alek smiled
“ Ugh! I hate sand!!” Alekus complain as he and Kie walked.
“ I do to but im not yelling about it” Kie said
“Sorry, my friends had been kept hostage in a desert, I hate being away from nature, and being here just reminds me of a very rough time in my life”Alekus said sighing.
“Do you want to talk about it? You don't have to but it seems to be bothering you” Kie said.
Alekus sighed softly and nodded. “Then let me start from the beginning”
“ I was born into a Noble family, My father was a head knight, my mother was a Princess. While my mother died when i was very young. One of my uncles was the Sulton, eh another name for King in that area. Since he had no male heir, being his nephew i was in line for the throne. But I didn't want to stay in this kingdom, they were cruel and vile. Even my father was a horrible Viscet. I ran away, I ran as far away as I could. I found my far to Camelot, the rival kingdom from where i came from. Anyway, I hide who i was and I made some close friends” Alek Said as he walked. “ Years down the line my father found me, and he tried to take me back, but the King of Camelot at the time, protected me as i was a loyal Citizen of his kingdom, as well as the Prince’s best friend” A soft smile come on Alek’s face
“ Anyway. After he left me and Prince Mert decided to go hunting, but he made a decision to bring along his fiance and her handmade. About half way into out trip my father and an army of bandits jumped us and captured us, He hoped that by holding my friends hostage he could turn me back to his side, He even tried to marry me off to the same Female that my friend was going to marry. But in the end we all escaped… few of us parted ways but the rest we return to Camelot.. Mert was crowned king after his father died..” Alek sighed and shook his head.
“ You don't have to continue if you don't want to” Kie said
“Thanks Kie” Alek smiled
I have until the 20th to get this entire thing edited, that's a small piece of it
Very interesting. Is that in the Den area? I haven't been in there for a while.
No this is my own thing
Im after this.
https://www.chickensmoothie.com/Forum/viewtopic.php?f=53&t=3793859&sid=6890906ad8ac9bf337f55e72ec8eb080
Im after this.
https://www.chickensmoothie.com/Forum/viewtopic.php?f=53&t=3793859&sid=6890906ad8ac9bf337f55e72ec8eb080
Enjoy the RP. I'll read the story tomorrow as I am too tired to do so right now. Plus I am heading off to bed.
Sweet dreams!
Sweet dreams!
This is the Alekus from the story
https://www.chickensmoothie.com/Forum/viewtopic.php?f=53&t=3705305&hilit=Owl
https://www.chickensmoothie.com/Forum/viewtopic.php?f=53&t=3705305&hilit=Owl
Just got on from an active day of watching my grandson. How are you doing?
im doing good, going over this story with a friend going to take a while 20 pages is not a quick thing to go over 