(... She can't beat Gitai. Even Narrator-Sama would have trouble... why does no one realie this and think she's a pushover?)
(I fail to see where she could lose to Gitai, and either way she just needs to kill Maki)
(... i fail to see how gitai could lose... She can just copy the god slayer or any immortal killing weapon, game over.)
(... why are you killing Maki? What about Rika? and gitai?)
(Maki already knew it was coming, the second her spark was separated, she already prepared for the worse incase she couldnt take Diana in her unpowered state)
(... i gvie up. at this point, i might as well join her, since im too depressed to argue anyways. now i have even more reason to be depressed, coz one of my fav characters is kicking the bucket soon... oh well, imma sleep ig)
(I still have other characters closely related to her-)
(actually.... wait. I have one more thing to try and convine you. One of Gitai's main driving forces is to protect her family. Maki dies, her freaing mother dies... she fails... and Gitai loses the will to continue. also dying pretty much,.)
(all our had work... gone... killed....)
(Few things to get you out of this mood, you cant permanently kill her you just have to find out when the time comes-)
(wait... Narrator can just corret the time line so she doesn't die lol)
( I just said shes gonna be fine-)
(how fine? ike, she comes back perfect? or, like, she gets crippled but lives?"
(Maki prevails, she'll be fine, I just cant tell you or that ruins the fun in a desperate situation )
(wait... i have an idea... What if Maki actually dies "permamantly" and gitai tries multiple times to kill herself, but most fail.. in till one last try, and it almost works, but she actually has a bigger purpose, so Narrator-Sama steps in and rewrites her back! More drama!)
(Not what I have in mind, you just gotta wait it out, ok let me type out the starter in a new PM)
(... ngl, im kinda baised towards my idea, and think it's better, coz i don't know urs. If i knew even a little, i might be more interested, but rn.. not rally.)
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