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Posted by Claine December 31st 2023, 10:15am
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I am currently running a very real and a very serious poll about an upcoming scene in the comic. Have your say!


I'll leave the poll open for about a week!!

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There is a bust of a man in front of a container ship. The man is wearing high viability work ware. He has tan skin and a white braid in traditional style - similar to how Barame wears his.
Narration: My father was a seaman on a container ship. He spent months at a time out at sea.
A woman is working on a sewing machine. She has short white hair and is wearing a simple white t-shirt. Many other sewing women sit around her.
Narration: My mother worked at a textile factory, working late into the night to meet deadlines.
Two children are running away from a woman chastising them. The boy is a younger Barame. He is wearing a white singlet, red shorts. He has a similar white braid and square framed glasses as he has an adult. The other child is a girl of about the same age, wearing a white and pink t-shirt and blue shorts. She has long white hair and round glasses.
Narration: Nadine and I--
The two children are sitting at table eating fast food. Barame throws a scrap of food to a brown blotched bulldog.
Narration: Separated by only 17 minutes--
The two children are walking in front of a Ferris wheel
Narration: We spent most of our time exploring the streets.

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