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California, 1996, cliff edge, Rayona's house

Rayona and Ven were carrying out a basic expirement that Rayona had already perfected, right now she was teaching Ven about it, "dummy, that isn't right, you're not doing it correctly" she told him and took the potion, "but I assumed that I was doing it right......", Ven turned his head to see his giggling girl friend, "you only assumed, not give me that", Ven knew she wouldn't give up and he really didn't know what to do, it was his first time doing that potion, "fine fine", Ven sighed and handed her the potion.

The two had finished the potion, right know they were thinking about testing it on someone when they heard a knock on the door, "Ray? can I come in?", Rayona chuckled and said "she sure has good timing", "and bad luck" Ven added, the two giggled, "Ray? are you home?", Rayona quickly stood up and was ready to shoot the potion while Ven opened the door.

"Hi Ra-"

"NOW!!!" Ven screamed and Rayona throwed the potion at the person, "SPLASH!" it went and shortly after were the sounds of dripping liquid, Rayona opened her eyes only to see that her friend blocked the liquid with a tray, slightly raising her hand Rayona said "hi Tyra....".

"DON'T HI TYRA ME!! IS THAT HOW YOU GREET YOUR BEST FRIEND FIRST THING IN THE MORNING!?", Tyra stormed in front of Rayona and hit her head with the tray, Tyra turned around and saw Ven, "AND YOU! YOUR LITTLE SIBLINGS ARE WAITING FOR YOU OUTSIDE!!", scared Ven quickly went and picked up his siblings and had them come in.

Shortly after Tyra had calmed down she quickly started explaining why she came here in a hurry, "I've got bad news" she started " someone's been starting a riot in the village", "isn't that normal?" Rayona tilted her head to the side, suddenly someone came into the house, it was Rayona's brother, Ethan, "she's being serious listen to her" he said and leaned his back on the door, it's easy to know if Tyra is serious, because big bro Ethan says so, Tyra thanked Ethan and continued "the riot in the village is against you Rayona", Rayona was a little bit suprised, she knows that the villagers hate her but they never went on a riot, but still she was expecting this to happen sooner or later, " the starter of the riot is Ven's sister, Nina", "what!? excuse me!?" Ven shouted and pointed at himself "yes, Nina started it, she called Rayona a witch and encouraged everyone to burn her to a stake, from what I heard, you're going to be burnt the day after tommorow." , Rayona nodded slightly and stood up, "are you going somwhere?" Ethan asked and grasped her wrist just as she was about to walk out of the door, " I'm going to Karry" ,Ethan let go of her hand, " to the asylum? then I'm coming with you" ,Rayona smiled and went off with her brother, "..... they're gone....." Ven murmured, "brother,brother!" the 5 year old twins shouted, Ven chuckled and picked them up, " we're going with them" he said and walked away.

The only person left in the house was Tyra, slightly she sighed, " I can't beleive it has come to this...." she murmured and was about to get out of the house, when she was hit by a small dart containing what seemed to be a love potion that Rayona had made.

-Asylum cell number 26-

Rayona had arrived a few minutes ago at the Asylum where her sister Karry had been kept captive, Karry was a sweet loving sister until something triggered a fuse in her that sometimes makes her turn into a psychopath

slowly Rayona opened the cell's door and entered with Ethan, naturally Ven was left outside since he brought Tan & Mae, " how have you been sister?" Rayona asked while looking at Karry playing with a doll on her bed, "oh I'm doing great! what about you Ray!?" she replied cheer fully whil placing down the doll, "I've been doing just fine" Rayona replied and hugged her sister tightly, they talked happily for a few minutes with everyone.
When Rayona had went away with Ven and the kids, Ethan stayed back for a while at the closed cell door, "Karry come here" he said and signed for her to come to the door, "what biggy?" Karry asked and looked at Ethan through the cell door's little window, "Karry, the villagers are going to burn Rayona to a stake", Karry looked dumb founded for a few minutes until she closed her eyes, slowly a grin shown on her face. She opened her eyes, the once blue honest eyes that she had turned into a dark red killer's eyes, "hi Kassy" Ethan said at Karry, Kassy is Karry's psycho mode, that usually comes up when Karry has big negative feelings, "hello Ethan, what might I be doing today?" Kassy leaned on the door and asked, "you'll be killing all the villagers today." Ethan said and put his hand into the cell, "I'll be contributing a bit of blood", happily Kassy bit Ethan's index fingers making him flinch a little, Ethan pulled away his hand from the cell, "good bye Kassy" he said and walked away, Kassy smiled as her dark red eyes started to glow.

Rayona and Ven had arrived at the house, Tyra was sleeping on the couch like sleeping beauty in sexy clothes, Rayona had went up to her room with the children for a bit.

Ven was sitting across from the couch where Tyra was, since he had nothing to do he just watched her until she had awoken from her sleep, "uuuugh......." she said and stood up from where she was sitting, as soon as she saw Ven she ran to him and hugged him, whispering into his ear, she sang a love song.

Slowly a spell was cast on Ven, a spell that will soon bring him to his end........

after casting the spell Tyra went out of the house and signed him to come with her, Rayona was about to come down the stairs, while Tan & Mae were already down by the time Tyra had walked out of the house; Ven approached Ray and said "I'm breaking up with you Ray", Rayona's eyes widened and asked, "what? what do you mean? why're we breaking up?" , Ven didn't answer and just went to the village with Tyra hand in hand; from afar Nina was watching, "fools" she said and grinned in delight.



Ethan was at the outskirts of the village killing some people who were against Rayona, though he was killing so many people his smile never left his face.

just when he was done killing all the people he saw a small letter on the floor, little did he know that Nina was sneaking behind him ready to stab his back at any moment, Ethan picked up the letter as Nina was coming closer and closer and closer..... , Ethan read the letter and it said, " I've put a spell on Tyra and she put a spell on Ven, everything's going as planned -Nina", he chuckled and turned around with his dagger before him, accidentally hitting Nina's eyes, she became blind, blood was gushing from her eyes as Ethan whispered into her ear "as much as I like you, I love my sister more", as Ethan stood up, he heard footsteps, just like the person he is he ran away making sure to not leave even one trace of himself in the forest.



The footsteps that Ethan had heard earlier were the foot steps of Traice Ven's brother and Nina's fourth youngest sibling, earlier he had heard Nina's scream and rushed to where he had heard it, when he had arrived there he saw Nina covering her eyes as blood gushed out of them, without a second thought Traice carried Nina to the hospital and rushed her into the surgery room, "DOCTOR! SHE'S BLIND!! I DON'T CARE WHAT YOU DO JUST GIVE HER, HER EYESIGHT BACK!!" he screamed,

shortly after the doctor came out of the room Traice asked, "how is she?'' , "she's fine but I need an eye donor" , without hesitating Traice said he would do it and continued on with the operation.



From what had just happened Rayona was struck frozen not even saying a word, "big sis? big sis? what's the problem?" Mae asked while Tugging on Ray's shirt, "no it's nothing Mae" Rayona said as tears rushed out of her eyes, "idiot, big bro's the problem, he broke up with her" Tan told Mae and hugged Rayona, "don't worry big sis, we'll always be your allies" the twins said and hugged her, a small smile shown on Rayona's face and for some reason her eyes started to glow a bright yellow color.

Just above Rayona's house a demon was listening, his name was Lucifer, "intresting...... " he said and dissapeared.



From helping Nina Traice had lost his eyesight, but even though with this hurdle it didn't stop him from going to his lover Karry's room in the asylum, "hi Karry I'm here" he said while opening the door but no one was there, "Karry where a-" mercilessly Traice's head was cut off from his body, the head rolled down on the floor as his blood gushed out of his body like a newly found spring, from the side of the fallen body was a shadow, a shadow with the horns of a devil, the shadow of Kassy the sweet,sweet Karry that Traice loved.



At Ven's house there was a commotion because of an asylum inmate killing everyone in the asylum, "what happened?" Ven asked as he came into the room where Nina and Tyra were, "it's horrible Tyra said and held onto Ven's hand, Nina explained everything to Ven, from what he had heard he decided to fight against Rayona and her family.



When Ven and Tyra went out of the room, from the roof Ethan entered and ambushed Nina, he tied her to a chair and left.

Half of all the villagers had been killed by Tyra when the fire started, it was made by Rayona, from the hill's cliff, Tan & Mae were with her, while watching the fire Tan remembered his brother and jumped off of the cliff to save him, worried Mae followed.



Tan & Mae were now in the village, and there they saw Ethan killig Ven, they hid until Ethan spotted them, they ran, Ethan caught them, they cried, Ethan killed them.

tired Ethan laid down on the floor, and looked up at the sky.


Tyra, was scared and ran around every where until she was on the edge of a house, she looked up and there she could see Rayona, her eyes where glowing a bright yellow color and she had a grin on her face, she looked down and she saw Rayona's shadow, it was no longer a human's it was a demon's. Tears flowed down her eyes as her best friend had turned into a demoness, "Rayona, you were always my frie- ", blood dripped down from Tyra's chest as a hand took out her heart from her back, "disgusting", from the back was Kassy with a heart in her hand, disgustedly she threw the heart on the ground and stepped on it, slowly the red twisted eyes of Kassy had turned back to the blue honest eyes of Karry, she looked around at what she had done and laughed, "I should die shouldn't I?" she said and stabbed her self in the heart.

Rayona was still on the cliff until her eyes turned back to their normal dark yellow color as she collapsed on the floor and cried so much that it became a water fall that drowned the village killing Nina, Ethan and putting out the fire she had created.

And that concludes the ending of the Witch's fire case, said Lucifer while laughing crazilly as he watched everything come to a close.

THE END

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